txolops Chapter 132
Chapter 132
Chapter 132
After publishing the book for 66 days and writing more than 27 words, it is finally time for it to hit the shelves.
This book has been going all the way, and it can finally be put on the shelves during the recommendation period of Sanjiang. I would like to thank everyone for their support to me all the time.
Let’s talk about some problems encountered in the creative process first.
Why are the flintlock guns developed by the two ancient generations and the technological advances are too outrageous, and why guns can no longer be used in the world of cultivating immortals.
Many book friends are entangled with these, which is beyond my expectation.
I don’t know how many years you have been reading books. In my image, more than ten years ago, there were too many time-travel novels that advanced technology and swept the world.No one said it was unreasonable.I just omitted the corresponding process.
As for why guns cannot be used in the world of cultivating immortals, I think that every novel about cultivating immortals can issue this kind of soul torture.
Why?Because I am writing a novel about cultivating immortals.That's how I set it up. If the real technology series weapons can be used in the world of cultivating immortals, then Li Fan will continue to reincarnate, create a torrent of steel, and reverse the world of cultivating immortals.That's another story.
There are still many small problems like this, maybe because I didn’t think carefully, I didn’t expect readers today to be able to argue to such an extent.
Overall, though, it's not a big deal.
What really had a fatal impact on the structure of this book was the fact that Li Fan came to the world of cultivating immortals for the first time, and the process of discovering the sea of clouds and vicissitudes was too short and too hasty.
My original outline was like this.
Li Fan came to Liuli Island after untold hardships, and joined the fleet after untold hardships.
Then he fought wits and courage with Zhang Haobo, and took away the captain's position by relying on the treasure that had sunk into the sea ahead of time.
Afterwards, the spirit pool washed away the miasma of immortality, and a few years later, he came to Wanxian Island.
On the island, after doing tasks for a period of time, I finally saved enough contribution points, and changed to a water attribute exercise.
I thought that since then, the journey of cultivating immortals has been smooth, but I found that in the past few years, the water attribute aura in the world has become increasingly scarce.
The speed of cultivation is getting slower and slower.
And the entire Cong Yunhai was also sealed off, allowing people to enter and not to leave.
Panic spread among the monks, and the killings gradually began.
Li Fan had no choice but to escape from Wanxian Island and hid in a remote island.
Later, as the sea water dried up, the seabed was exposed.Li Fan came to his senses and understood the reason for the difference between the two lives.
……
In the middle, I originally planned to write at least 100 chapters.
Like the first volume of the Lord of the Mysteries, the reversal is revealed only after sufficient foreshadowing has been done.
But he had to change his mind midway.
Because you may not know that when the book was 100 words, there were only more than [-] collections.
I couldn't push it even after trying the water.
Really according to the original outline so much, is to die.
So I had to speed up the progress, and the reversal was completed in more than 40 chapters.
Although the grades started to improve after that, it was still a little bit less interesting.
Still the same sentence, too urgent, too rushed.
Inevitably, there were many flaws, such as underwater treasures are too new, not like hidden treasures in the sea at all.
But it can only be as round as possible.
The second problem is that the Xuanhuang Heart Refining Mantra shortens the recharge time of [True] too much. When it was set at the time, I lacked experience, and the setting directly reduced the time by 11 years.
This also led to the fact that I had to fill up the 11 years before I could continue the plot of the previous life.
It also caused the problem of slow progress reflected by many readers.
Because I don't just write about this life, but also consider embedding threads for the plot development of the next life.
In my opinion, these two issues have had a relatively large impact on the structure of this book.
Everything else is trivial and has little impact.
Let's talk about a few issues that readers have received more feedback from.
1. The protagonist's cultivation is too slow to improve.
This book is not a level-up and monster-fighting novel in the traditional sense, and with the protagonist's practice of a hundred generations, the practice of a lifetime is of no use to him.
2. The protagonist's hang is too big.
I only ask one question, with the protagonist's current skill configuration, raising his realm to the immortal state, is he the opponent of the Fa-transmitter Tianzun?
Even the way you cultivate is left for you by others, so how can you beat it.
So the hanging is not big enough, you have to continue to open.
3. [True] The foundation building problem.
[True] is beyond the world and involves the law of time. It must be impossible to use it to build a foundation in the early stage.
How the protagonist uses [True] to build a foundation, please wait and see.
……
What follows are some instructions.
I am indeed a newcomer, not someone's vest.
So the writing is a bit immature, please forgive me.
I will try my best to improve myself, and I hope everyone will encourage me a lot.
My job is okay, so I don't sell it badly.
Writing mostly depends on interest.
I am also a part-time job and a novice. It is really difficult to write [-] words for more than four hours a day.
Maybe the brain speed will increase in the future, and the codeword efficiency will be higher.
The so-called text to carry the Tao.There was a paragraph in He Zhenghao's first lesson on cultivating immortality that day:
【"Some mountain peaks seem to be towering, but in fact they are doomed and cannot go any further. Some are just a small slope now, but how do you know that after a few years, they will not grow into pillars supporting the sky?"
"Just like the Shaowei Mountain at the foot, it was inconspicuous at the time, but after decades, you can already see all the small mountains at a glance."
"Of course, it's more like the countless peaks under the sea of clouds. From the beginning to the end, it can only be used as a foil, silently looking up at the peaks above the sea of clouds."
"The mountain is like this, how is it suitable for people?"】
This sentence is also spoken to myself.
At that time, the collection of this book had not broken through one hundred.And there are thousands of books in the same period.
I can only encourage myself so much.
Now, with everyone's support, the results of this book are already better than most of the books of the same period.
And thank you all again.
Thank you friends who have been voting and rewarding.
I would also like to thank the editor Fuchen for his constant help.
It will be on the shelves at [-] o'clock tomorrow, there may be a delay of a few minutes.
First, three chapters will be released in a row, and two chapters will be added later in the evening.
If you think this book is well written, please give me a first order.
Everyone, see you tomorrow!
(End of this chapter)